Can I Be Your Enemy ?
Can I Be Your Enemy ?
How does it feel to catch the attention of your worst enemy ? Melanie knows the answer to this question pretty well.

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Hiya! I'm Luscious Lolly [screen name]. So, this is the first time I'm writing a story. If, the feedback is 'good', I will consider writing another story. I don't have a personal account here on SL. I have tons of hobbies. && am currently living in Tokyo, Japan. One of my favourite passtime's are ... writing. Hope you like my story! Oh ya, pls be a darling && leave a review. [P.S~ you will see a-lot of pink in this profile]

Prologue

Melanie Sanders is the only poor student at Clementine Day School, the school of the ridiculously rich and privileged that is ruled by Flower 4 or F4, a group of four boys who come from extremely powerful families: Dan Hamilton, the leader and heir of the Domyoji World Finance Group; Chuck Millind, the introverted son of a large company; Desmond Anarchy, a player who is the heir of a tea ceremony school; and Sky Disnorte, a madam killer with ties to the underground. If a student gets on the F4’s bad side, he/she gets a red notice and is bullied and driven out of school. Melanie hopes to pass her days quietly-- without drawing any attention to herself-- but one day, she stands up to Dan in defense of her friend. The next day, Melanie gets the dreaded red notice. Even though she is harassed, Melanie decides to keep going to school because she is a “tough weed”. She declares war right back on the F4. Her resolve gets the attention of her crush Chuck Millind and oddly enough, rouses romantic feelings in her worst enemy, Dan Hamilton.



Chapter 1

Clementine High School

Classroom - 9.00 a.m

Why? Why? Why?!!...

Why do they bring branded goods to school?

Why do they have Franck Muller? Why Louis Vuitton? Why Omega? Piaget? Why Chanel ?? Why do high-school students have chaffeurs to take them here and back home?...It's CRAZY!!! I'm sick of saying that, and this is my 2nd year in the Fall. People from High-Society come to Clementine High School. This distinguished private high school is an escalator from Kindergarten to the University.

''Nice! Where did you buy that strap?,'' asked Emily. ''Vegas.'' Ashley answered proudly. ''I heard that this is a Limited Dior, so I went there and bought it. ''Really? I stayed at the Beverly Wilshire Hotel in LA.'' chirped Octavia.

Everyone from the outside world admires the school, though.

''How are you?''Mr.Knight said. ''Fine.''replied the entire class. ''Pass this Questionnaire Paper around now.''continued Mr.Knight.

What!?! It's only a school field trip, not a holiday?! Various exotic places listed in the questionnaire - Bali, New Caledonie, Maldives, Canada. I'm a commoner in this school. So, I have to follow their stupid rules.

''It's the RED NOTICE!'' Everybody looked up from their paper. ''It's the RED NOTICE!'' Anthony Mark from class 2-A got a red notice!'' someone shouted louder this time. ''Homeroom is over!'' exclaimed Mr. Knight. He then escaped to the teacher's lounge as fast as his feet could bring him. ''Let's catch up with Anthony.'' Yeah !'' Every single person started towards Him. ''Where to go?...Where?''cried Anthony to himself. People came heading Anthony Mark's way from either directions. ''Argh! Help!''screamed Anthony, face pale with fear.

Ugh...

''Melanie Sanders.''said a cute- looking girl. ''I don't get it, but is it okay to not follow them?''

A clueless transfer student...If she knew how things worked around here, she would regret entering Clementine High.

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Chapter 2

Clementine High

10.30 a.m

I started heading for the door...with this transfer student walking closely behind me, afraid of being seperated.

''What's the matter with everybody?''the girl asked.''What is a red notice?''It's a declaration of war from the F4,''I answered breezely.''F4?''she continued with keen interest.''A group of four 3rd year students who control this school. Flower Four--F4 in short. Anyone who goes against them get a red notice... That person gets ruthlessly bullied by the entire student body.''

I turned behind to survey this girl.

''Why is everybody subservient to the F4?''

I don't think she gets what I say. Oh well...

''The four of them are sons of super-rich families.'' I explained to her. ''Isn't everybody in this school like that too?'' she asked again. ''They're in a completely different league,''

We are walking towards the canteen now, almost reaching the ''punishing grounds''.

''This school receive's enormous amounts of contributions from their parents. So, even the teachers are powerless against them.''

I stole a look at my watch bought for a great deal from a warehouse sale. Such an eyesore...

''They've been promised total freedom to do whatever they please here. That's why they've never been seen wearing uniforms.''

I ended the ''introduction'' and gasped for breath.

''It's the F4!''shouted Emily with pure admiration. ''F4, F4, F4, F4...'' Everybody chorused with delight. '' The flower four members entered through a small entrance.

''The F4 members are...''I started my speech again when I remembered that I haven't introduced the main ''characters'' to the transfer student. ''Sky Disnorte--the madam killer who only dates women 10 years older than him. It is rumoured that his parents are major bosses in the world of organized crime. Desmond Anarchy--the successor of a leading tea ceremony school. He's an outrageous playboy. Chuck Millind--the pampered son of a big trading company. He acts cool and doesn't say much. The most mysterious member of the group. And finally... Dan Hamilton--heir apparent to the world renowned Doumyouji financial empire. He's the leader of the F4 and the dictator of this school. ''



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More characters will be added as the story continues. So far, there are 4 characters up for grab.

Melanie Sanders

Age: 16

Height: 5'5

Hair: Dark Brown

Eyes: Hazel

Other Features: Short for her age, despises the F4. Stands up for her friends and is loyal to them.

Emily Madison

Age: 16

Height: 5'6

Other Features: Best Friends with Ashley and Octavia. They admire the F4 and are considered ''fans''. I call them the ''ah-nnoying'' 3.

Ashley Cornelia

Age: 16

Height: 5'8

Other Features: Adores the F4 members especially Dan. Slightly taller than her Best Friends.

Octavia Spedinski

Age: 16

Height: 5'6

Other Features: Has a nasty mouth. Enjoys bullying Melanie.

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