SugarLoot

ohhh
well but you songs are amazingg

haha yeah i guess
so do you like writing stories?

okay well throughout the novel you notice that John (the rockstar) is a very insecure person due to childhood traumas. THis is why he is unstable and was on drugs when he met Annie. Annie helped him to get clean and stuff because she was madly in love with him. Then it is when John realizes that he is actually in love with her too and when you're in love with someone you should do the best for the loved one. This is why he realizes that with him, Annie will never be happy because he is a very troubled person and together they would be unhappy. So they dont end up together.

haha do you want me to tell you the end?

well its about a rock starr who has a girlfriend called Annie and is scared of falling in love with her because he has had bad experiences in the past. In the first part he narrates the relationship with his three past girlfriends and in the second part he starts narrating the relationship with Annie and how it was different from the others. At the end he has to make a decision between either Annie or his fame.

oh thats a good idea. I have a couple more.
Ive finished writing a novel too.

thankyouu desiree :]!
well i dont really know cause its just a short story

okay here it is:

Perfume In The Air

It was actually Sam who first introduced us. I recall it was a summer night when we were still young and stupid. And who knows, maybe the high temperatures were the actual culprits of our immediate passionate click. “I’m David.” He said with a flirtatious grin. The stars were shining brightly when we kissed. His smile was light from heaven. From then on I knew destiny had plans for us together. Our romance had been traced in the sky.

David was a painter and a major hedonist. But there was something about him that no one had. A little nothing that made him special in my eyes. Maybe it was the chemistry between both or maybe just that I had fallen in love with a junkie. But nothing mattered at all. We loved each other, didn’t we? It was everything we needed. It was love at first sight. Nothing less or more, it was balanced. Or so we thought.

Only one month had passed since we had met and I was already living in his apartment. And it was that same night when I arrived that I did it for the very first time. I had smoked some pot before, but never something like that. Never something so pleasant, so agreeable. It was… “Do you want some?” he had asked. How was I supposed to say no? “Here,” he handed me a syringe filled in with a yellowish liquid. “It’s really good.” Then he smiled.

That night we didn’t sleep. We couldn’t stop shooting. We didn’t want to. We laid on the floor for hours, holding hands and laughing loudly, looking at the ceiling as if we were looking directly into the milky way. I was feeling a profound sense of highness and no one was knocking me down. David and I were invincible together. We were flying across the universe and psychedelia was invading our minds. We were ecstatic. “I wish I could purify our essences, mix them and then keep them in my heart forever.” He had whispered into my ear that night.

We continued using non stop for about five months. David’s daily routine consisted of painting, eating and getting high. He used to turn on Amon Tobin’s music while we scored some heroin into our system. He said it created a better vibe. Maybe it did, but I didn’t really care about it. Everything seemed great in our heads, so perfect. We had so much love, love in abundance.

But it was time that reality struck us in the eye. We had no money left in our bank savings. It had all been injected into our veins. This is when our little world started to crumble down.

ah thats awesome
im pretty sure you will be succesful :]

btw, would you mind telling me what you think about what ive got of my short story so far? its just like 500 words.

i loved it
really
you're really talented :]